This is far and away my favorite storie from you (so far). At the risk of repeating myself, the set up is genius, it's so damn erotic, super filthy, and yet loving and tender, all at the same time. It's a tour the force and I'm a little envious. This really worked on me. The escalation is splendid, it keeps giving and giving. I left a lot of comments, please feel free to ignore them and let me know if I leave too many. Final plug: I published a story yesterday called The Third Date, would love your thoughts if you have time. You are an incredible writer, Simone, and I'm thrilled to follow you on here.