Real talk: This is my favourite erotic short story I've ever written, and it's one of the least appreciated ones. Thank you so very much for taking the time to read it and write to me about it. I love that she keeps using his full name during her narration of the story and that at the end she asks for his name - meaning she did not know it at the time. I love this because it proves he kept his word and came back. I imagine her telling this story as an old woman, on a porch, recalling the steamy details while smoking a rolled cigarette as John Percival Kacy tends to some chore around the house, a cabinet that needs fixing or something. Thank you so very much for your comment, it means a lot...